Wednesday, November 12, 2008

With You .....

My very first Poetry Attempt :-)))




I feel like a queen when you care
I feel like a woman when you romance
I feel like a child when you pamper
I feel like a wife when you stare
I feel like a bird when you give space
I feel like an idiot when you fight
I feel like am on top of the world when i realise "YOU ARE ALL MINE"

4 comments:

Srividya Padmanabhan said...

yepedi.... poem ellam...lol!!

Unknown said...

Hey ! Great !As far as poetry is concerned....i don't know ! But it is great to see your ability to express your feelings as words !

Unknown said...

Congrats! This poem, as your first, depicting the joy & pain that you feel yourself in & how u take it & see and it quiet difficult to bring out in words…. you have a real talent... keep it up, and continue to share.

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